Friday, December 19, 2008

Wake-up call.

Inside a bubble.
I once belonged there.
In the small, magical world of mine,
droplets of rain were like heart-shaped balloons, enchantingly
fell from the velvety baby-blue clouds made of yummy marshmallows.



There,
I was crowned The Jewel of Fantasyland.
Exemplary wisdom, faultless beauty and meritorious sense,
I had it all.


Unexpectedly,
someone injected a markedly toxic needle
into the dainty bubble and it shattered.



Like a booming thunder,
it now strikes me hard that I'm just me.
Plain, inept and second-best.

11 Comments:

Anonymous Anonymous said...

My level of English is much inferior,not in a position to comment.
However,humbly I would suggest your 3rd paragraph should reformat and rephase more appropiately.
Well,you have actually improved so much compared to last year.
I am so proud of you.
Good start and always enjoy and be happy with what you are doing.
DAD

December 21, 2008 at 12:10 AM  
Blogger Jiali Lau said...

Hehe.

Two reasons i wrote it tht way.

1. To make it more literary. =)
2. I really felt tht way when i scored lower than my friend in a recent test. =(

December 22, 2008 at 4:18 PM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

you want the whole world to revolve around you and put you in limelight.However,when things are not going your way,you will be very disappointed.Why you refuse to grow up and face the reality?

January 25, 2009 at 11:36 PM  
Blogger Jiali Lau said...

Why must i grow up? What's so great about being an adult? Do adults dream and believe in their dreams? Do adults wish under the twinkling stars? They don't. Kids do. i do. That's the difference between me and you. yeah i want the whole world to revolve around me. Am i wrong for that?

January 25, 2009 at 11:46 PM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

im just wonder n if u thnk it is right,then go ahead..can others question u?!

January 25, 2009 at 11:54 PM  
Blogger Jiali Lau said...

well.. I admit i'm like that. I hv a philosophy & it goes like that: if you hurt, cry; if you rage, strike out; if you hope, get ready for a disappointment.

neways, u no me?

January 26, 2009 at 12:01 AM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

Your attitude and behaviour only hurt the ppl tht care for u .Ppl tht care for you is rare but very precious.Why cant u get rid of ur watever philosophy?r u so proud of it???!

January 26, 2009 at 12:11 AM  
Blogger Jiali Lau said...

Jeez u make me wanna cry. I'm never proud of myself okay? I'm forever incompetent. It's just.. U'll never know anyway. Do u even know me?

January 26, 2009 at 12:17 AM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

IN UR SUBCONSCIOUS,U R TOO PROUD OF URSELF SO U CANNOT ACCEPT ANY FAILURE..MAY B UR PARENTS PAMPERED U TOO MUCH,RITE?I DUN MEAN TO MAKE U CRY,I JX HAVE U IN MY BEST INTEREST.TO BE FRANK,IM NOT UR FRIEND,SORRY...

January 26, 2009 at 12:26 AM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

once again,sorry for accidentally stepped into ur territory.i jx bought a book The Kite Runner.Good Night... XD

January 26, 2009 at 12:53 AM  
Blogger Jiali Lau said...

I googled it & i like da saying - for you, a thousand times over.

January 26, 2009 at 5:21 PM  

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